Typography
To me this water bottle label is a bit odd for a few reasons. I hate the red-orange they have going on in it. It makes me think of fall and leaves, not water. Also the text below the box is looks crushed and I have no idea what they were thinking when they used that script font for spring water. The bars going across the top and the bottom of the label are unnecessary and they make the label look cluttered. Im also not sure I like the composition. But I think an easy fix would be to move the text below the central bot to the top of it and then move the box closer to the bottom so that the text doesn't get crushed. Also lose the texture in the background, its weird.
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